I am thankful for my family because they care about me. The way they showed that they care about for me was by going to all my basketball games. Also they showed it by giving me things that I asked for. Sometimes when I asked for things they would get it for me even though it would cost a lot of money.
My family does a lot of things for me when I ask them to do it. Also I would do the same thing for them. The things that they would do for me is, going to all of my games. Also they would get me a lot of Gatorade for practice and games.
My family is always there for me, and when I need them. The time when I need them is when I am hurt or when I get sick. They are always there for me no matter what. Its like when I need someone to talk to they are right there waiting. They are the only ones there when I need them through hard times.
I picked my family because they are all of those things. I love them so much for being all of things to me and they love me for doing to it to them. My family and I are really close, just like I am with my friends. Sometimes my family and I get along all the time, and sometimes when we don’t. Most of the time we would because we would always be happy. The time when we wouldn’t get along is when someone is drinking or someone is just having a bad day.
Jason T
Nice paper! Although, you need to start using “since” instead of “because” so it makes your papers sound better. The word “Also” is used to much at the beginning of your sentences, so try and think of different words to use. You may need to start making your topic and concluding sentences better with vocabulary words you have in reading class! Anyways, you have a good paper!