My mother had already practiced with my siblings, so I was easier to have. It was a spring morning at Kotzebue hospital, that I was born. The parents I was born to are Minnie and
LeBron Ivanoff. I have one brother and one sister. Polarbear my dog is like a sibling to me. My life has been full of all my cousins born, traveling and favorites.
All my cousins are so fun and loving. Snow White was born first. Her parents are Shrek and Fiona. Chalaa was the next one in line. He was born October 10, 2002. Kani, Chalaas brother was born in 2004 from Dean and Treca Ivanoff. Charles Jade was born from Shrek and Rena. Kollin came to this world on June 4,2004. On January 25,2007 Jillian was born to Brenda and Jerry Ivanoff.
I have been to some awesome places in my life. My first trip out of state was when I was two years old. I went to Hawaii to see my grandparents. My next trip was to Seattle for my uncles wedding. I was the ring boy. Then I went to Phoenix to see my auntie Cinderella. That was when I was seven and a half. At nine I went to Disney World with my grandparents, brother and cousin Snow White. We had a lot of fun. I like traveling to different places.
My favorite things have happened all throughout my life. One of my favorites is going to Hawaii when I was two. I went with my family to go see my grandparents. Another favorite was when I went Orlando with my grandparents, brother and cousin Snow White. We went to the Disney Theme parks and we had a blast. After that I got a motorbike. I was amazed and surprised when I saw it in the garage. This is something I had wanted for a longtime. When I was four we got my dog Polarbear. When she got of the plane she peed for a longtime. Getting Polarbear was awesome! I had so much fun with my favorites and I hope my kids will too.
In conclusions my life has been full of exciting adventures with my family. My favorite was having my cousins born and growing up. The trip to Orlando was my favorite vacation. I had a lot of fun At the Disney Theme parks. I hope my future will be fun and exciting as it has been throughout my life.
Hello GAGE
What you did well.
What i think you did well is that you where not really putting the real names.
I think that you can put your dog Polarbear sentenced by the first one instead of leaving them separate sentences. The fairy tales names where really funny.
the most important part that i liked was you put in the first paragraph with all your cousins and the date they where born on.
You should of put more things going to your trips instead of going from one thing to another. For ideas and organization you did pretty good for a 5th grader!!!!
<3Christy<3